If you want to know what run-on sentences are and how to prevent them in your writing, look no further. This article will teach you everything you need to know about what causes them and how to fix them.
In short, a run-on sentence is a sentence that uses incorrect punctuation or conjunctions, making the sentence difficult to read and understand.
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Before you can understand a run-on sentence, you need to know what a sentence is and isn't. To be sure, let's have a quick grammar review.
A sentence comprises one or more clauses, each containing a subject and predicate. When you join several clauses together to form a compound, complex, or compound-complex sentence, there are specific rules you need to follow. Sometimes, you end up with run-on sentences if you don't follow those rules.
Here are some common ways this happens:
So let's look at this one by one. One mistake people make is to misuse commas when connecting clauses. That's called a comma splice. It's a common error when connecting two independent clauses together. The proper practice is to join them using either a comma and a coordinating conjunction or a semicolon alone, but people will commonly connect them using just a comma.
Here's an example:
The weather's terrible, we can't go outside. ❌
This often happens when using transitional expressions, like 'therefore' or 'however.'
I'd love to take a nap, however, I have too much to do. ❌
As we saw, another common mistake that creates a run-on sentence is a fused sentence. These happen when there's no punctuation at all and no conjunctions, either.
For instance:
We bought a rubber plant it died we won't be buying any more plants. ❌
And finally, polysyndetons are another type of run-on sentence that use too many conjunctions.
Here's what that looks like:
The dog and the cat and the rabbit all love kale and carrots and peanut butter and they hate apples. ❌
Now that we know what run-on sentences are, how can we avoid them in our writing? The first key is to be vigilant. Make sure you check your work and use a grammar checker. When you spot a run-on sentence, you can fix it! How? You're about to find out.
Let's look at comma splices first. There are three ways you can fix them:
Let's look at our two comma splice examples from earlier and use all three methods to fix them.
The weather's terrible, we can't go outside. ❌
The weather's terrible; we can't go outside. ✅
The weather's terrible so we can't go outside. ✅
We can't go outside becasuse the weather's terrible. ✅I'd love to take a nap, however, I have too much to do. ❌
I'd love to take a nap; however, I have too much to do. ✅
I'd love to take a nap but I have too much to do. ✅
I have too much to do, otherwise I definitely would have taken a nap. ✅
When it comes to fused sentences, the problem is slightly different since there are no conjunctions or punctuation at all.
So to fix it, you can:
We bought a rubber plant it died we won't be buying any more plants. ❌
We bought a rubber plant and it died so we won't be buying any more plants. ✅
We bought a rubber plant and it died. We won't be buying any more plants. ✅
We bought a rubber plant. It died, so we won't be buying any more plants. ✅
We bought a rubber plant. It died. We won't be buying any more plants. ✅
We won't be buying any more plants because we bought a rubber plant and it died. ✅
Finally, with polysyndetons, you can:
The dog and the cat and the rabbit all love kale and carrots and peanut butter and they hate apples. ❌
The dog, the cat and the rabbit all love kale, carrots and peanut butter but they hate apples. ✅
The dog, the cat and the rabbit all love kale, carrots and peanut butter. Thay hate apples, though. ✅
And there you have it! Now you have all the tools you need to go out there and fix any run-on sentence you run into!
That concludes this article on run-on sentences. I hope you feel a lot more confident that you can avoid them in your writing.
Let's summarize what we've learned:
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